I have been contemplating the fictional construct of characters; not
their own particular complexities as such, nor the manner in which they
evolve through the course of the narrative, but the effect they have on
other inhabitants of their literary realm. In the process of beginning a
new work my attention is primarily bestowed upon the individual
rendering - transforming the skeletal shadows that exist as nebulous,
half-formed notions of themselves, into the heated pulse of life with all the emotional turbidity that coils and pulses
beneath the facade. In short I am intent upon the literary life-giving
properties that transform a fictional individual from the
two-dimensional imprisonment of page to the soaring expanse of an
imaginative reality. For there are innumerable fictional characters
that, for one reason or another, do not succeed - they remain flatly
unengaging. Dull and lifeless beneath the turn of page, until the reader
tires of their insipidities and the book is returned, barely skimmed,
to the shelf. I remain fervently of the opinion that the formulation of
character, with all their attendant complexities, is critical to the
literary success of a novel.
For the writer beginning anew, fictional individuals are essentially conceived in isolation: each circumscribed bundles of human frailty arriving fresh in the narrative, influenced by their own particular past and propelled by their own particular agenda. Memorable characters, however, do not adhere to a linear progression through a
given work, evolving according to some predetermined parameters to come
to some tidy resolution. As much as I focus on the
attributes, the proclivities, the mannerisms, the essential aspects of a
given persona - I wonder if the greater magic lies in the
spaces between; in the literary ether that permeates between one character and another.
Perhaps a visual analogy might be found in Tesla's lamps where plasma filaments extend in an arcing
stream of colored light from the inner electrode to the outer glass
sphere. Might it not behoove us to think of characters in this way? Not
themselves so much - but the manner in which they interact with others -
the electricity that arcs between; the fear and the passion - that which exudes from the very pores, exhaled in sharp breath, inhabiting the air as a charged emotive force independent of both parties. A scene of my recently completed novel (and one which emerged unaltered despite the multitude of revisions) comprised a confrontation between two protagonists, where one nursed a legacy of hatred nourished and intensified by generations of economic and social oppression. The encounter was fraught with tension; the escalating, almost primal, anger of one charged the atmosphere with a barely-restrained ferocity that to some extent defined the relationship between the two for the remaining part of the novel. Perhaps this particular chapter survived intact when its neighbors were heavily revamped due to this inter-character frisson that does more to compel and engage us than any straightforward recitation or revelation of attributes might do.
The precise nature of these atmospherics are often as elusive as they are varied, and might just as readily be defined as a languid ease than a snarling hatred. Cause and effect - the vehicle of which is not always visible to the naked eye - is perhaps all the more dramatic for being so imperceptible. Seeking clarity and inspiration in physical analogies my mind drifts to inter-cellular communication: the ebb and flow of ions,
sugars, and amino acids that permeate the phospholipid bilayer; air-borne
pheromones that communicate sexual desire; compounds emitted by trees suffering an insect-onslaught that evoke a similar defensive response in arboreal bystanders; or the enigmatic dark matter that populates interstellar space and can be inferred from the rotation of stars and the gravitational tug on emitted light - in short what happens between!
Jung expressed it
beautifully: "The meeting of two personalities is like the contact of
two chemical substances; if there is any reaction, both are
transformed." To expand upon this metaphor (harnessed as it is to a literary imperative), a character isolated exists and proceeds in a fashion essentially
predictable (a substance inert), governed by genetic and cultural predispositions and environmental
context; but when others of uncertain motive and intent intrude upon the
scene there ensues the excitement of uncertainty. What Jungian reaction might manifest, and how might such a fictional synergy impact subsequent narrative development?
One of the most vividly expressive character-interactions recently perused was
that between the Machiavellian Jasper and young Rosa in Dicken's Mystery
of Edwin Drood. Jasper, the seeming-devoted uncle (a smilingly villainous Claudius prototype) to the ominously-missing Edwin, threatens dire repercussions if Rosa refuses his amorous
advances. Assuming the presence of onlookers, (situated as they are in
the school gardens) Jasper's languid poise assumes
dramatic counterpoint to the brutal nature of his communication. The dominant
personality in this scene exists not within the malevolent Jasper or the
cowering Rosa as much as the sense of atmosphere charged, caught, and
held between the two; it acquires a degree of physicality irrespective of flesh, bone, and blood, a quivering tautness that inhabits the air like an electrified charge - an emanated sense of menace that excites one and utterly oppresses the other.
Perhaps this is merely an effusive reiteration of the obvious,
but words are my stock in trade...and the perpetual quest to make myself
understood (and indeed to understand myself) in a cascade of verbiage is,
indubitably, an occupational
hazard. Self-indulgence aside, my focus,
insofar as character development is concerned, has been primarily a
linear one - fabricating the fictional individuals within the confine of plotline,
establishing a sense of them - from whence they have come, their
literary travels within the novel, and the resolution to which they will
find themselves at journey's end. But much of them, indeed the elusive
qualities that render them something more than words on a page, arises
not from authorial forethought, as much as the engagement with a
fictional 'other' and the frisson that arcs between. I have been
thinking primarily of characters as a progression, wending their way
through the novel - perhaps a closer examination of the dynamism
that ebbs and flows between one and another, the flux and flow of engagement, might prove beneficial to a writer ever-seeking to improve her craft. Ironically, as reliant as I am upon a
profusion of words, this frisson of interaction might be utterly mute,
dramatically conveyed by what remains unsaid and undefined.
This evocation of atmosphere seems something key within the formulation of a novel. Not so much who or what the characters are, but how they will engage, what might arise from the mix, from the exchange, from the chemical transformation that Jung alludes to. For after all, what are we alone? Growth potentials are limited; the trajectory a relatively dull and lifeless affair. But there is magic in interaction, an uncertainty in a previously unimagined combination. The atmosphere that lies without. A poignant, and ofttimes wordless, conveyance that elicits an equally visceral response. And to take that elusive dark literary matter that pervades the inter-character gap, to shape it, mold it and keep it warm between the palms, to be dispensed as required like fairy dust - the atmospheric additive that enables literary flight.
Dear PJ, an analysis of your brilliant essay requires another essay, so let me just say this: if more writers considered character building as you do, we would be mercifully spared the amount of trash in which we drown.
ReplyDeleteAh dear dear Marta - your gloriously kind commentary simply made my day. Thank you my dear friend for your readership (for which I am honored indeed!) and taking the time to leave such wonderful commentary behind! I am utterly thrilled to the marrow that you enjoyed my humble musing.
DeleteDear PJ, I have always admired your talent for combining the most interesting ingredients in your titles for the Humble Musings and concocting a delicious literary stew! And I love that you consistently bring a scientific component to your brilliant literary analyses! What strikes me as extraordinary about this one in particular is the concluding paragraph, and your progression from the real ('that elusive dark literary matter') to the surreal ('dispensed as required like fairy dust') to the ethereal ('the atmospheric additive that enables literary flight'). Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Shari - I admit I do rather relish those recipes that consist of an unusual concoction - strange bedfellows, if you will, that are seldom combined but perhaps complement each other in unexpected ways. Just stumbled across a cheesecake (literal recipes as well as figurative ones!) with a curry crust that is just intriguing enough to have to attempt. I am most grateful indeed for your kind commentary, and coming from one with such eloquent ability herself - well! I am blushing with quiet pride! Thank you!
DeleteMost interesting PJ! I have never thought of character development in quite this way before - you have presented a very unusual perspective in a way that makes me think differently about characters and different ways to write them. Thank you for continuing your humble musings - I enjoy them very much!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sarah - yes, I was rather interested in this notion myself - proceeding from flux to flux, interactive moment to interactive moment - and the linear progression of character somehow seemed rather a staid enterprise by comparison. The character still progresses of course, but perhaps with an authorial concentration on these particular occasions of emotional flux as prompted by interaction. Something to think about anyway!
DeleteDear PJ, a magnificently charged musing that makes one's skin tingle. An author of such profound and unique insight can only produce electrifying prose. You whet the reader's appetite for more, and fill him with anticipation to read your forthcoming opus. So hurry up and let us have it!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear dear Dana! My opus (in all its verbosity!) should be out on virtual shelves by mid-December at the latest - a little (or not so little!) Christmas present to myself! Your generous support is so utterly welcomed and appreciated in what is, essentially, a rather solitary endeavor. Thank you my dear friend.
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